This was wonderful! I'm dabbing furiously at my eyes. I am so moved by this story.
Your choices of the three ghosts were perfect, absolutely perfect! The tears started coming the moment Leonard hugged his dad, but that's all right! So sweet and hurty. Gaila is sweet and kind, just like she should be; and then the haunting version of himself, alone and without Jim or his daughter. Lessons to be learned.
Beautifully written and characters so well presented. Well done!
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Date: 2010-12-09 02:58 pm (UTC)Your choices of the three ghosts were perfect, absolutely perfect! The tears started coming the moment Leonard hugged his dad, but that's all right! So sweet and hurty. Gaila is sweet and kind, just like she should be; and then the haunting version of himself, alone and without Jim or his daughter. Lessons to be learned.
Beautifully written and characters so well presented. Well done!
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